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Writing & Grammar Workshop: Do Training Examples Need to Keep it Real?

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" As soon as I saw this example, I knew that an IT person wrote the training example, not an accountant. The question of the day is this: to what extent do training examples need to be real-life examples? " In truth, the example would be a better sentence without those words. I hope you can join me.

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Writing & Grammar Workshop: Do I Have to Repeat "a" or "the" in a List?

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In my most recent online writing class , I noticed that when deleting unnecessary words from a sample sentence, some students wanted to keep the word the before every item in a list, and some wanted to take it out. You cannot use the on the first, third, and last items, for example, while omitting it from the second item.

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Writing & Grammar Workshop: Would vs. Will

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In training documents and manuals, we often have to tell the reader what will (or would) happen if they do (or did) a certain action. For example, suppose you want to tell the reader the consequences of pressing cancel.       If you press cancel, the document will not be saved.   

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Writing & Grammar: Should I Put a Comma after But?

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by Jennie Ruby Here are some sample sentences to consider:   "[Switching from video games to electric cars] may not sound like the most obvious career shift, but , given Frohnmayer's location, it might be a smart one." Some examples of transition words are however , therefore , thus and hence.). " Inc.

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Writing & Grammar Workshop: Converting Empty Phrases to Gold

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Strangely, these wordy phrases tend to pop up in the first sentence of an article or training document, right where you need to be grabbing the reader's attention and holding it. For example, my first sentence could have been Empty phrases decrease the reader's interest in your topic. Let's try that on another example.

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Writing & Grammar Workshop: Who versus Whom

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  Here are some examples:   * Who/m put the sneakers in the dryer?*.   So far, we have seen only action verbs in the sample sentences. I'll share good examples next time.   Are you an eLearning developer who has been tasked with creating an effective voiceover script?

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Writing & Grammar: "If I Were" or "If I Was?"

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" The correct use of were  in this expression is an example of the subjunctive: the use of an unusual verb form to indicate that there is something iffy about what is being said. Here are some examples of supposing the impossible or untrue. . If so, consider attending my Writing Effective eLearning Voiceover Scripts class.

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